I get it now. Frilly poetry and descriptive, abstract sentences don't ever get published. They want hardcore, jagged words crumbling in their throats. That is what they crave. Something witty, sophisticated, but not too chewy. Also, if it hurts the eyes from straining to get through the 200 worded sentence, destroy it, or compact it into 10 words.

I figured out the logic to writing..... there is none.

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